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Oh! Sth is something? Please use full words for us old farts please

Oh! Well It's Long And I'm Lazy! Lol But I'll Write Full Words From Now On Don't Worry.. But You Don't Know Sth! I've Learned It I Don't Know When I Was In The 7th Grade! Lolz

I finally made me an Ev set for here.




What do you think?

Wow Leia - really great I love the lyrics you use on them

Thanks Steve

awesome, I like the third one

thanks

wow I love them all stefanie - well done

this a poem I wrote at night. I couldn't sleep :S
It's called Change and it has a dialog.
Here it is:

Change
All these years
I’ve tried to change my way
To become a better person
I thought about it everyday

But everytime I tried
Things didn’t seem right
I ended up realizing
I’ll never win this fight

Look into my eyes
What do you see?
Is it really me
Or what I long to be?

“I can’t see a thing
Maybe nothing’s inside
You said you wanted to change
Why are you trying to hide?”

I won’t do a thing
Because I fear the pain
If I standstill
Everything will be the same

“Things can’t remain the same!
You have to keep trying
I’m sure that soon
You’ll be no longer crying

Fighting against myself
This I’ll try to do
But I have to defeat
Someone else too!

“Follow your heart
Release what’s in there
No one can stop you
Do it if you dare!”

It’s going to be hard
But nothing in this life it’s easy
I’ll be all alone…
Can’t you go with me?

“You’ll have to do it on your own
And you’re going to win this fight
I gave you the strength you needed
Take care and goodnight.”

What do you guys think?

IT ROCKS

Thank you Stephanie
It comes from the heart...

ur welcome i write too maybe i'll post it some day

I really like it Silvia

Quote :

Change
All these years
I’ve tried to change my way
To become a better person
I thought about it everyday
But everytime I tried
Things didn’t seem right
I ended up realizing
I’ll never win this fight
Look into my eyes
What do you see?
Is it really me
Or what I long to be?
“I can’t see a thing
Maybe nothing’s inside
You said you wanted to change
Why are you trying to hide?”
I won’t do a thing
Because I fear the pain
If I standstill
Everything will be the same
“Things can’t remain the same!
You have to keep trying
I’m sure that soon
You’ll be no longer crying
Fighting against myself
This I’ll try to do
But I have to defeat
Someone else too!
“Follow your heart
Release what’s in there
No one can stop you
Do it if you dare!”
It’s going to be hard
But nothing in this life it’s easy
I’ll be all alone…
Can’t you go with me?
“You’ll have to do it on your own
And you’re going to win this fight
I gave you the strength you needed
Take care and goodnight.”

It's Really Good!! I Love It..
And I Know What You Mean I Totally Feel You..
I Really Understood It..

StartSomething wrote:

I really like it Silvia

Teardrop101 wrote:

It's Really Good!! I Love It..
And I Know What You Mean I Totally Feel You..
I Really Understood It..

Thank you both
This was my first English poem lol

Dead within
All alone again
In this world
Darkness consumes me
I cant breath and need to be free
From this pain in me, it fills me with fear
Love is a word I knew now all I feel is emptiness
Lost in this grim world
M y soul is now a prisoner of the darkness
I long for the way back home where you and all your love filled me
But this darkness surrounds me and within me, it kills, I’m lost
Dead, I have nothing… not even you

Like U wrote:

Dead within
All alone again
In this world
Darkness consumes me
I cant breath and need to be free
From this pain in me, it fills me with fear
Love is a word I knew now all I feel is emptiness
Lost in this grim world
M y soul is now a prisoner of the darkness
I long for the way back home where you and all your love filled me
But this darkness surrounds me and within me, it kills, I’m lost
Dead, I have nothing… not even you

omg that's beautiful

thanks

Thats really sad Stefanie but amazing

thanks one more
Hollow

In my empty shell I lay,
Waiting for the break of day,
Darkness crawls,
And I feel,
Hollow.

In this nightmare,
I’m falling,
Drowning in myself.
This lifeless soul I drag on,
In search for the light,
I can’t see.
Chilled to the bone,
I have nothing left to be.

Hollow I’m going,
Sinking in my fear,
To see no tomorrow.
I feel this sorrow,
It’s taking me over,
It’s taking forever to find myself.
Surrounded by what I fear.

The battle is here,
Me and my fear
Blood drenched tears,
Pour as I scream,
This seem to go no where,
I have to win,
I can’t let it cease me.
With this last strike,
I slash you down.
Now you drown in my gain,
Never to be reclaimed.
-Stefanie-

^ that's fantastic!! I love it