The creative thread

I LOVE IT!!! It's Really Amazing! And I Say That I Can Write But I'm Nothing Compared To You..

random things hope u like it

Love Them Especially Sharon's

thanks

great!

thanks

Deadly Poison wrote:

That is great Silvia... I really like it I love the 'nothing changes' part I think that at some point we all feel like that, it's great !

good job!

Thank you, Mariel!
I was inspired, I guess lol

Teardrop101 wrote:

I LOVE IT!!! It's Really Amazing! And I Say That I Can Write But I'm Nothing Compared To You..

You have your writing style and I have mine. Both have good things, right?

Yeah Right But Your Style Is Really Close To Mine.. The Things You Write Is Kinda Like The Things I Write

Deep within

Dead within
All alone again
In this world
Darkness consumes me
I cant breath and need to be free
From this pain in me, it fills me with fear
Love is a word I knew now all I feel is emptiness
Lost in this grim world
M y soul is now a prisoner of the darkness
I long for the way back home where you and all your love filled me
But this darkness surrounds me and within me, it kills, I’m lost
Dead, I have nothing… not even you

OMG! It's Awesome! I Love It!!

thanks dania glad u like it..i have lots more from where that came

POST THEM!! POST THEM!! I Love To Read Them

Fear

Walls of darkness corner me
The silence is killing me
Alone I roam, I’m lost
I can’t find my way back home

Where am I?
What lies here?
I can feel it breath on me
Taking all I have left
Nothing left for me
I crawl 4 safety I scream please someone save me

From this nightmare
I'm stuck in
Is it or is it not
Real
No

Why me?
Why has this horror struck me?
All alone I fear to never see a living soul
Left to live in a place so cold
My souls fading away
I’m losing my mind
I can’t find myself
I’m out of place
What hell hole have I lost myself in?
Is it in my head or I’m been mislead.

I’m going out of my mind
I’m walking through this maze filled with disgrace

What I must have done to be in this place?

Is that a light?
I see shinning bright
There is a smile in my heart
As I run to depart this darkness that covers me up.
So close 2 it
But the darkness zips it up
Leaves me cold
Im so alone


I hear my name
The voice so sweet
Says,” wake up honey”

I open my eyes
That’s when ur in my sight
My love my pride
What a delight?

For sure I’ve dreamt of not having u by my side
The fear haunts but I know ur not leaving me alone. Not for long

OMG!! I'm Speachless! It's..... It's Amazing!!
It Would Make A Great Song

yeah it could haha long though

My Turn
I've Been Told It's A Bit Violent But I Was Mad

BLOOD ON YOUR HANDS..

IT'S OVER NOW..

It's Over.. It's Over Now.. It Doesn't Matter Anymore.. Cause Now I'm Just Dead.. My Blood Is All Over The Floor.. My Blood Is All Over Your Hands.. I Blame You.. I Blame You For Everything.. I Blame You For Every Tear I Cried.. For Every Pain I Felt.. I Blame For My Miserable Painful Life!!

And In A Weird Way I Just Wanna Thank You For Ending It!!



My WORST ENEMY

I Can Feel My Heart Beating.. I Can Feel My Blood Banging In My Veins.. As My Rage Rises.. As Revenge Fills My Body.. And Take Control.. Take Control Of Me.. Wanting To Destroy.. Wanting The Truth To Appear.. I'm Sick.. I'm Sick Of The Pain And The Suffering You Caused Me.. Tonight My Rage Rises Over You.. Tonight I'll Get My Sweet Revenge.. Tonight I'll Get Out From My Coffin And Come Back Home.. To Take You Back With Me!! To Take You Back With Me To The Dead!! To Give What You Deserve.. TO STAB YOU RIGHT IN THE BACK MY FRIEND.. Just Remember Me.. Remember That Someday I'll Be Waiting For You To Bring You Your Worst Nightmare.. Just Remember That When You Fall Down And Go Down Into The Drain It Will Be Because Of Me.. My Sweet WORST ENEMY!!!


For A Best Friend Who Stabbed Me Right In The Back And Became My Worst Enemy..

er.....man she or he must a asshole...hate people like that...LOVE IT ALL

Yeah She Is But I Got Over Her Shit Now
Thanx

FOR PEOPLE LIKE THAT....SHIT KIND
what i do is not of ur concern stop pointing at what i do u fool and see the things u do.
all the time u judge me
all the time pullin me down
nothin seems to stop u from pointing at me
and I cant help to wonder every thing i do is wrong to u
why r u so cruel.
what the fuck is ur problem....
leave me alone stop haunting me
let me be

Love It
It Described Everyone Around Me.. They're Always Judging Me And Always Telling Me Everything I Do Is Wrong And I'm Not Normal.. Just Fuckin Leave Me Alone..

well that what poems are ..about yoyr feelings...glad u like it
okay a huge and i mean huge arkwork update

those are cool

thanks

Good, you posted your poems!

I like the 2nd one best... My parents are always saying that I don't do things right, that I don't study, blah blah... I wish that someday they will be proud of me.
I like the pic as well =) Good work, stef!